Reviews for Gone
XxmickeyTxX 4/29/12 . chapter 1
The more I read, the more I can feel your hurt. I like the syntax as well; it works well with the subject matter.
Phatome 1 4/29/12 . chapter 1
This portrays the slight jealousy, contempt, and curiosity that happens with these things quite well. The repetition holds it together.
Blood and Butterflies 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Ho ho ho... this brings back memories!