|Reviews for Out of Reach|
| XxmickeyTxX 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Simple and straight to the point. But I feel like it could use more...umph...like, something to really draw the reader in.
| Phatome 1 4/29/12 . chapter 1
A very bittersweet feeling of losing an old friend, and thinking of there new life.
| Meadow Frost 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Your poems seem to have a song quality to them.
As for a name for it, if you can't come up with something take from the poem its self. Like call it, 'Out of Reach' or 'Someone New'
| Blood and Butterflies 4/29/12 . chapter 1
Even though you don't know what to call this poem, it was very rhythmic! (I spelled that wrong, didn't I? Oh well)
I'm beginning to see a theme for a few of your poems. It's good to explore a concept over and over again until you've squeezed all you can from it.