Simple and straight to the point. But I feel like it could use more...umph...like, something to really draw the reader in.

A very bittersweet feeling of losing an old friend, and thinking of there new life.

Your poems seem to have a song quality to them.

As for a name for it, if you can't come up with something take from the poem its self. Like call it, 'Out of Reach' or 'Someone New'

Even though you don't know what to call this poem, it was very rhythmic! (I spelled that wrong, didn't I? Oh well)

I'm beginning to see a theme for a few of your poems. It's good to explore a concept over and over again until you've squeezed all you can from it.