|Reviews for Better The Devil You Know|
| Essie B Hackett 10/29/12 . chapter 1
I think this is a VERY good beginning...it left me with a lot of questions(Just as a beginning should)
| The Gray Witch 10/25/12 . chapter 1
This is very intriguing and a joy to read. 'Bliss' or whatever her name is, is a nice change of pace from other supernatural stories I've read. She can look after herself, she's... self reliant. Please post/update soon.
| Whirlymerle 10/19/12 . chapter 1
That's a spiffy cover, by the way. :)
[Now all I had to do was find a permanent place to stay, like an apartment or sheltered alley, or anything warm and dry./Luckily, I had gotten that prick of a vigilante or whatever he was off my tail yesterday.] I would put some sort of scene break in here, since you're transitioning between two scenes and your character's emotional state changes dramatically.
I like how action packed this chapter was—I thought you successfully made this an intense opening chapter.
I feel like I didn't get a good sense of the settings. I would have liked to see a skunk by the garbage in the dark alley or the grimy bathroom tiles with soap dripping down the sink or something like that.
Otherwise, nice job,
| Guest 8/22/12 . chapter 14
great story still wondering where you going with it which makes it all the more interesting keep going pls
| The Tabby Kitteh 8/20/12 . chapter 12
Best vamp/wraith story Ive seen in a long time besides The Immortal Rules story and the awesome movie Priest.
| Guest 7/18/12 . chapter 10
| AlmaLucia 7/18/12 . chapter 10
When Charlotte suggested the girl was a prostitute I busted out laughing xD Loved this chapter can't wait to read about how Alice is going to help find the vampires! :]
| FebruaryBabes02 7/14/12 . chapter 9
Poor Charlotte. She has to deal with so much...
I really liked this chapter! I am looking forward to the next one :)
| FebruaryBabes02 7/10/12 . chapter 8
I feel sorry for her, having to carry that knowledge around... :'(. I hope it makes Ash see her more humanish!
Great chapter, I cannot wait for the next :)
| Mary Kate Ashley 7/10/12 . chapter 1
It is really nice!
I like the descriptions.
| Writing In Ink Forever 7/9/12 . chapter 7
This seems like a good story so far, and I encourage you to continue soon! :)
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 7
this rocks i hope you keep updating and i dont think you suck as a writer.. nice descriptions not too long winded not too short and you give enough to get interested but keep us guessing..
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 1
OMG freaking awesome !
| FebruaryBabes02 7/9/12 . chapter 7
Great chapter! I love Ash :) looking forward to the next update!
| FebruaryBabes02 7/6/12 . chapter 6
This story's awesome! I can't wait for the next update!