I think it's good that you strayed from Amber as the main character. You were able to introduce everyone at a nice pace until they eventually became main characters. It's better than how you would usually cram multiple new characters in a rushed paragraph, expecting the reader to remember them all.

I really like where this story is going, update soon!

yay its awsm! luv it 3 update soon and no centipedes... and you stole my popcorn...

Hey bunny, just letting you know, you doubled up the line

" 'Did you really think I would die that easily? I only wished I was dead when that idiot Major started talking stupid. He was saying something along the lines of 'You will never escape again!' Yet here I am." He smiled' "

Well ya know how some people say "That's the oldest one in the book" ,you could say "Thats older than the book its self"

“Don't get me wrong. Im not trying to make a monkey out of you. I can't take the credit”

“I bet your brain feels as good as new, seeing that you've never used it."

Someone said that you are not fit to sleep with pigs. I stuck up for the pigs.

Someone took a photo of you once, but it didn't turn out. You could be seen too clearly.

Anyone who told you to be yourself couldn't have given you worse advice.

Let's play horse. I'll be the front end and you be yourself.

I'll never forget the first time we met - although, I'll keep trying.

You are not the worst person in the world, but until one worse comes along, you'll do.

You remind me of the ocean - you make me sick.

I heard that you were born, your father threw rocks at the stork.

Do you have to leave so soon? I was about to poison the tea.

I hear you are very kind to animals, so please give that face back to the gorilla.

Keep talking. I always yawn when I'm interested.

I heard you went to see the doctor and told him that you wanted a little wart removed; so he had you thrown out of his office.

I heard you went to have your head examined, but the doctors found nothing there.

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Interesting but I could tell it was rushed... Focus more on Amber, she was the original main character! Write more!

DUN DUN DUN! THANKS FOR THE BIRTHDAY WISH! Still loving it... I think Jade's power is so cool, but mis her with Scarlett and WOW! KEEP WRITING BUNNY!

arrrrrr I'm going to kill you! why didn't u tell me there was a chapter 3! :(

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I love it 5abunnylover, write more... I'm waiting for the next chapter XD