I like this, although I thought there was too much dialogue; you needed a bit more description. I like the way you combined violence with humour; when Mary tells Flint where her father is... I liked her answer.

Not sure if this is meant to be a parody or not. If it isn't. great potential for expansion. If it is... well, hmmm

This is such a dry parody of every western story ever written that I was nearly laughing too hard to finish reading it.