Wow, what a hard-hitting poem! I like it!

I really enjoyed the last two lines-I think that was my favorite part of the poem, just because they turned so well from the rest and gave it a very sonnet-like feel, I also thought the lines were very clever, so good job with that, I wouldn't ever change it! I also liked the speaker voice in this poem because it's apparent that the speaker is feeling a lot of emotion and passion on what they're thinking about, and it's reflected well through the choice of words. I also thought your enjambments were well placed and it made for a good flow, overall, a unique poem definitely brought to the forefront by it's clever last two lines!