Your poem provoked emotions in me. Hmm.. it seems like you're the only one who has been able to. So far.

I loved it.

I was going to write a piece to your piece as in; Remember the time when you got sick on my birthday and so I took care of you. You came outside in the snow to give me a card and I thanked you quickly and got you back inside your house and took care of you. I made you chicken soup and I made certain that you were all comfortable. When you got a car I was careful and I didn't crash it - actually I bought you your favorite music to listen to while driving.

I felt like adding this to yours and I hope that you don't mind however I didn't like your last line as it had made me sad.