That is so sad ! I'm crying right now and it's so hard to make me cry ! Amazing one shot

;_; That's heart-breaking, but he did the right thing. That's true love, right there. Girl says she'll die for him. Guy replies she won't have to.

HUUUUUUH I didn't review this when I read it months ago?! Well, I'm reviewing now.
This was so beautiful. And sad. A little morbid, but still so eloquent.
Please write more because I want to know what's gonna happen to Sofia!
Also, please clarify: David didn't bring a gun so did he also NOT commit suicide? Because the ending kinda makes it seem like he was about to go kill himself. :(

I thought that this was a one shot? There is further continuation?

oh my goodness. what. why. what. stories like this make my heart hurt.
but you executed it perfectly. :)

Depressing but it is totally sucking me in. Please update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl

Ugh, FP won't let me go into my account so I can't Favorite this!

I can honestly say that this made me cry. It's sooo sad :'( And David actually loves her enough that he tricked her into not giving up her life for him.

Okay, yeah now I just can't stop crying :'((

This is so sad. What could be worse than losing someone you love so so much? :/ This is an amazing first chapter and I do hope you update soon!

this was beautiful. will there be more to this?

This was sad :'(

I Love it!

It was amazing. I hated how he left her in the field! Like ughh why ! But wouldn't the mother being wondering why David knew Sofia was in the soccer field and didn't move her to somewhere else? Just saying. But overall it was awesome.