|Reviews for Last Wish|
| Guest 4/1/13 . chapter 1
That is so sad ! I'm crying right now and it's so hard to make me cry ! Amazing one shot
| gabijaluvs2rite 11/4/12 . chapter 1
;_; That's heart-breaking, but he did the right thing. That's true love, right there. Girl says she'll die for him. Guy replies she won't have to.
| The Siege 9/22/12 . chapter 1
HUUUUUUH I didn't review this when I read it months ago?! Well, I'm reviewing now.
This was so beautiful. And sad. A little morbid, but still so eloquent.
Please write more because I want to know what's gonna happen to Sofia!
Also, please clarify: David didn't bring a gun so did he also NOT commit suicide? Because the ending kinda makes it seem like he was about to go kill himself. :(
| hydrogen 8/5/12 . chapter 1
I thought that this was a one shot? There is further continuation?
| toffeecakesxox 7/27/12 . chapter 1
oh my goodness. what. why. what. stories like this make my heart hurt.
but you executed it perfectly. :)
| Bubbly Girl 7/16/12 . chapter 1
Depressing but it is totally sucking me in. Please update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| Ditto123 6/8/12 . chapter 1
Ugh, FP won't let me go into my account so I can't Favorite this!
I can honestly say that this made me cry. It's sooo sad :'( And David actually loves her enough that he tricked her into not giving up her life for him.
Okay, yeah now I just can't stop crying :'((
| endorphins 5/2/12 . chapter 1
This is so sad. What could be worse than losing someone you love so so much? :/ This is an amazing first chapter and I do hope you update soon!
| SwimmingThroughExistance 5/1/12 . chapter 1
this was beautiful. will there be more to this?
| IlikePANDAs 4/29/12 . chapter 1
This was sad :'(
I Love it!
| PillowPetter 4/29/12 . chapter 1
It was amazing. I hated how he left her in the field! Like ughh why ! But wouldn't the mother being wondering why David knew Sofia was in the soccer field and didn't move her to somewhere else? Just saying. But overall it was awesome.