|Reviews for Little Treasure|
| nfosurferII 5/5/12 . chapter 1
Not trying to be rude, but Haiku patterns are 5 syllables on one line, seven syllables on the next line, and five syllables on the last line.
| 44musicfreak44 5/2/12 . chapter 1
This was rather beautiful.
The only thing I could comment on, is the 5-7-5 format, the last two lines don't follow it.
Very nice poem and imagery :D