I have read all of the chapters, and I must say that your writing is just wonderful.

Hi! I'm from Fanfiction. Well, first, I must say that, if my name was Rage and I had red hair, I'd probably have some pretty bad anger issues too. He seems like he's a cool kid. Where did you come up with the inspiration for the Braxz. It's a pretty darn interesting critter. I look forward to more!

Keep writing!

Hello fellow writer! Good to see new stories being published here. Hmmm you have put your main character in a rather interesting situation and his hair being all bright red made it more prominent.

However, I was thrown off when you said 'barely missing' during the top half. So it's correct if I assumed he hit the students with the thrown chair?

Other than that, the opening chapter has an interesting start and I would like to see how will you be developing your character hereafter.

Keep on writing!