hehe this was funny! continue please :D

I'm not gonna lie, this made me smile haha. Bastion is a likable protagonist, really, and the way he tells things hooked me in the story. 9.5 out of 10 :D

P.S. I know I'm a kiss-up (pitiful) but could you please review my stories? It'sa comedy as well, and it's random, but it makes sense (I hope) and has an (I think) interesting storyline. :D

I love this! It made me laugh and I enjoyed it so much. Please write more like this! :D x

3 3 3! love it! love bastion... love your work! uber amazing!

SLP!

This is adorable. HMM. I WONDER WHO THESE PEOPLE ARE. LOL

This story is fun, quirky, unique, and I love it! I'm excited to read more!

Your writing is absolutely adorable! I love Bastion a lot. I love how unique his mind is. (if it makes any sense) D

Anyway, I love it and please update asap!

XOXO

SLP! D

i love your writing! it's hilarious! keep it up and update soon :)

Hello! D i love your story so far. I love bastion! he's adorable. I do hope he wont go for the popular girl. It'll be too much of a cliche if he does. Even if he does, I'll love it all the same because your writing is amazing. It captures the essence of whatever it is that you're putting on the "table" . Love it! Great JOB! Please update ASAP!

XOXO

SLP! D

Your narrator's voice is downright adorable :) I really like what you have up so far. They're relatively short, but they're also funny and sweet.

-Allegra

I like the beginning so far...looking forward to reading more.

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