|Reviews for Pushing Through The Darkness|
| Natari Mirumura 7/17/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Simply beautiful. This was a pleasure to read and a short story to grow fond of. Amazing job, keep it up :D
| Nalledia 6/9/12 . chapter 1
:D Awesome imagery, Yue! Love the abstract descriptions and ideas that you've brought across without sounding like a philosopher; so many people do that when they write like this. It made for a beautiful picture in my head, and a kind of high fantasy feel. Truly beautiful!:D
| Redz 6/8/12 . chapter 1
I liked it! I liked the description of the tower as "filled with great dreams of the sleeping and the woken." Personally I thought of the being as a hidden hope we are unaware of until it surfaces. However, "Misery was fought" doesn't sit well with me, I don't know why, maybe because having a word which describes violence (even if they don't fight it as such) doesn't fit with the atmosphere you've created. Anyway, it's great. Keep it up!
| AnonymousLily 6/2/12 . chapter 1
I'm thinking this is poetry again! It doesn't have to rhyme. I loved the images like "shadow infested," "seared the feeling of incompletion," and "law and order, dark and light, merged and formed a new way of patching the mud." I loved those high abstract opposites merging and patching mud! Keep writing!
| JaredDean 5/10/12 . chapter 1
*smiles* I liked this. I liked the idea of the the two beings and you said a lot in a short space. I wonder if you could expand and make a chapter with each beings journey to the meeting?