It was good. But I think Corbin needs another chapter to make good on his promises

I'm gonna have so much fun describing the ass melting thing in my own story XD

and yes, ninja's are super awesome :D

I'm still wondering how in the world you came up with that weird name 0.o

I love red heads XD

I instantly thought of Coppercab when I read the title xDDD.

A really humorous story. I know you're not planning to, but I say you should make a story about ''the Red Ninja'' (or whatever he'll call himself.) I say you should Make a real story out of it, but I'm just suggesting it would be fun, Feel free to ignore my whole review, but still a nice story.