the wordplay with the title.

the mention of 'asbestos' - your nano name!

and the last stanza was like the topping of your cake of success.

incredible, i love this, i can't even tell you how good this is.

i loved the description in this, especially the first and second stanzas.

"those puddles on your brain, drowning your soul in/bathwater because/the fog in your eyes won't clear, vision distorted,/and all you see is a monster, yourself," & "asbestos skin, you're so flammable,/catching fire like a match when you rub against my/rough edges, sulfuric eyes,/but you just take like paper and burn"

- um, hello, talk about genius! i'd quote more, but then i would just end up quoting the whole poem, ha ha. anyway, this was amazing (and a million other adjectives) as usual, i'm looking forward to reading more from you soon. :)