|Reviews for Broken|
| MrFlorenceandthemachine 5/17/12 . chapter 1
Very good! WHY CAN I NOT WRITE LIKE YOU ? XD
| atarashiaijou 5/15/12 . chapter 1
Great story! You should continue it. Hopefully she will find some hope :) And you did a great job maintaining your tense. It can definitely be a challenge to stick with one and not switch back and forth.