I don't understand the line 'nothing fed the Minds of none' did you mean another word instead? The end dosent really have anything to do with the beginning as well it adds a twist to it ;). It does have a lot to do with releality at the beginning which I liked and then as it progressed the topic changed I felt
Greet poem ;)

It's sad that that girl did commit suicide; the imagery here was blunt but I think it came from the heart and that is what makes it work. A beautiful but sad piece.

I really liked this. I get the idea of suicide that's apparent, but I don't know if you ever read the novel 1984? Anyways, this poem kinda has that dystopian feel to it and the fragility to life and the strength in order. Sorry if that doesn't make sense if you havent read it hahah. Good job.