Interesting. Looking forward to seeing how it pans out; lot's of interesting questions raised. I want to find out more.

Hey Breia!

I really love this! It's so easy to get hooked into it, and your imagination is wonderful and creative! I love stories with themes like this one and I love the names: Malchior, Jocasta, and the land Azria. This is really good! I'm really looking forward to see how much it progresses(: I can't wait until you do post the next chapter up!

- I even made an account on this site just so I can keep tabs on this stories progress(:

-Evelynn

This is really good.

Kitty