|Reviews for Abandoned|
| Swallow-tailed Kite 6/28/12 . chapter 1
You need more descriptions. And when you just saw a dude change into a wolf, your normal reaction wouldn't be "hey, is that you?" I think that I'd be screaming and running away, for one, or maybe really scared. Amazement would come later.
| JackieDesSables 5/8/12 . chapter 1
Ooh, interesting start! Great way to get the story rolling. Can't wait to read further.