|Reviews for Betrayal|
| Natari Mirumura 5/19/12 . chapter 1
I like this poem very much. Great job, keep it up .
| Shauni Cooper 5/5/12 . chapter 1
This was good. I liked it a lot and thought you put a lot of yourself into it; that is very perceivable in my opinion. Very well done. Keep it up! :)
As always, keep writing!
| kaykay-writes 5/5/12 . chapter 1
beautiful, I say! gives me the feeling. Not soppy, and cheesy enough, cheesy enough is great. keep it up.