I like this poem very much. Great job, keep it up .

This was good. I liked it a lot and thought you put a lot of yourself into it; that is very perceivable in my opinion. Very well done. Keep it up! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni

beautiful, I say! gives me the feeling. Not soppy, and cheesy enough, cheesy enough is great. keep it up.

- kaykay-writes