|Reviews for Never Ending Beat|
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant 12/21/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting. What time-period is this set in? when white men first came or on the plains? Other than that, it is really good.
| XandraAli 6/8/12 . chapter 1
This was very nice, I love stories about the Native Americans and I really think you captured the essence of what they felt. One suggestion, when you say "It sounds like lightning" do you mean thunder instead?