|Reviews for The Moon|
| bookppl93 5/6/12 . chapter 1
Very dark. I like it.
| True Talker 5/6/12 . chapter 1
This is sad and it makes me think.
| Archia 5/5/12 . chapter 1
Oh that's ominous, and the last line makes it even more so. I enjoyed all the stuff about the moon, it seemed to be the main aspect here. "Do you feel the moon?/ I do." I like how that's repeated at the end, just the simpleness of the words 'I do' make it deep. Really nice poem.