This is amazingly good.

Kitty

Great Poem, very mysterious!

This was good. I really enjoyed this one and thought you used excellent imagery and descriptions. You wrote so little, and yet my mind formed so many pictures about this piece. That says a lot about your writing. You forced me to project so much out of so little, well done! You sound like a promising writer, and I hope you continue your good work. Keep it up! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni