oh how terrible. I do like that they are getting so much closer and more comfortable around each other. Nice!

Poor Trey, he must feel horrible! :(
Amazing chapter! Although I'm still angry at him for the bet haha

It was all fine and awesome until you came at the end begging for reviews -.- how dissapointing.

Other than that, I guess it's fine.

oh my gosh, I can't believe he took the challenge!

Trey, really? REALLY? Okay I hope if... I mean WHEN, Mel finds out about the bet, she KILLS HIM. Better yet, she breaks down into tears, breaking his heart too. Hahaha sorry, just getting a little TOO into the story... ;)Of course, after ignoring him for a few weeks, they should get back together :)
I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER :D

i am crying ..gosh how can he do dat ...man i am pissed ...:O i hate trey right now even though his family is not in better condition he needed money dats not d way to get money dey r many diff ways .i wish mel leaves him once she gets to know abut d bet ..god i am burning wid rage :(

update soon

Hmm...it's interesting that when I first started reading this, I thought it would just be a cliche little romance. But it has definitely turned out to be more complicated, and dramatic, than that. I don't know if Trey can handle anymore drama right now...but I know it would be unrealistic for me to wish he could give his buddy the two hundred bucks and tell Melody about the bet and it be over and done with. Oh well...can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

thanks for this amazing story and for the bet i think its better for them if mel knew about it from trey if you want the story to get less tragic and thanks again

keep up the amazing work and my favorite character is probably Melody if i could jump into the story i would so knock some sense into Trey and Luke both. and not sure which one reminds me of myself none really.

1) Trey
2) Make Trey tell Mel about the bet
3) Rob
;D Hope you get to 30

PLEASE REVIEW! this chapter is so suspenseful! :)

agh! I wish this were longer! :( but it's still amazingggg to the very core! My favorite character would probably be Trey just because he's changed from the beginning of the story til now, like i mean he's learned from his mistakes and he has morals. I'm not saying that the other characters don't, because several of them do, including Mel, but there's just something about Trey that makes me like his character. If I could jump into this story I would probably do something against Luke, because that boy just makes me mad :l. haha :D And as for which character reminds me most of myself, I'd probably have to go with Jade because
honestly, I'm a kid at heart hahaha :P. I hope you get thirty reviews, I'd LOVE a big chapter!

favorite character? trey and his mom and Melody,update soon:).

good chapter luke can be evil gosh dat sucks ..
feel srry for rob :( so much
update soon

Trey is my favorite