its really good! but when you have more side stories than main story it gets a little annoying. but i love Ink and Kain and Jerek

A sweet touching chapter, so good.

Wow, very creative. Lovin' it.

Wow what an amazing story! The emotions each character exhibits makes me feel such a close connection to each of them. Really well done, I hope to read more. The anticipation of learning each back story is really eating away at me. Having stories in the middle of another, I must admit, is a bit irking to me. I would merely organize things differently but that's completely up to you, I can simply read in a different order so that's no problem at all, just a thought.

All the new things I learn too, like the introduction of Marill and what happened to her almost makes me want to give her a hug, as well as poor Ink who suffered so much.

Overall, great job and I hope to read more soon, keep up the good work!

Yes! It's the main story! Love it but it's too short! I wait the next chapter :)

Each chapter taken individually, are very entertaining and well written. You obviously have talent.

But trying to read this as a story is far too confusing to me. And as a personal preference I dislike it when stories constantly jump between points of view, and having a story jump back and forward in time is a deal breaker.

So, I am sorry but I am unable to force myself to read past the start of chapter 5. I will go and see if your other works are easier for me to read, since you do seem to be an entertaining writer.

Loved this chapter and I can't wait to see more!

I really like the plot ideas you have :)
But when reading it was a little chaotic. It was hard to follow the different story lines. Your A/N helped but I think if you found some other method to distinguish between time gaps and the two different plot lines it would make the story so much better. I have read two other stories that have the similar general idea of a polygamist slash relationships and think this really does have great potential. So I hope to read more from you! Bye! And happy holidays!

Haha, Ty for the shout out! This is a wonderful chapter! I love seeing nikki and James together!

Oh Child! I gotta love the One Love!

Please Whight more stories ill die with out theme

Hahha, wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what insane thing James comes up with for a date!

Interesting! Update soon!

I love love love Following the Rules! I also really like Forget the Rules, but i'm not as into F the Rules yet. Why didn't you post them as separate stories?

ANyway, I really love Kain and Raven. I think they are amazing! I like the others too, but they are my favs!

I can't wait to read more! Please Update Soon! :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!