|Reviews for After Eden|
| I'm lost in stereo 6/9/12 . chapter 2
I wish I were there just to see his smile... xD
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| WhoDoesn'tFleeTheInescapable 6/9/12 . chapter 2
He smiled, when you gunna updated! Make it soon. Please!
| I'm lost in stereo 5/9/12 . chapter 1
He's just amazing! If I could I'd keep him for myself :)
Please update soon, I wanna know what's gonna happen! :D
| Silent Ruse 5/7/12 . chapter 1
You got a good story going on here. I may not have read any of your other works, but depending on how well you write this one I may go out of my way to read them (Something about already written stories makes me uninterested simply because I don't get the feeling of watching the story develop with the writer.)
I really enjoy how the story plays out and I hope it keeps up with the great narrative flow you have going already. I didn't feel bombarded with information nor did I feel too consumed with trying to figure people out. It was a nice blend.
One thing I wanna say though about the whole "Clone" statement and the idea that she's like everyone else. Be very careful in portraying this or you might make him out to be a hypocrite for the simple reason that the typical anti-conformist almost always has the black hair, dark eyes, black clothing type style (Thus making him like also another group of people who don't want to be like everyone else... thus making him a "Clone" of that genre.)
But other than that, really great read, hope you update soon.
Until the next chapter.