|Reviews for Broken inside|
| RockySwordleaf 5/8/12 . chapter 1
it was an okay poem. not spectacular, not terrible. but you have potential. it seems like you're trying to go deep, but you're barely able to scratch the surface. get in touch with human emotions. find what inspires you, and milk it as much as you can. i find music to be particularly inspiring.
| thetabbykitteh 5/8/12 . chapter 1
This is good.