Wow this is a great chapter.

Aaaaaawwwwweeeeee that's to bad. Are you going to keep the same title or are you going to change it. If you do can you send me the new story title so I can look for it.
Until next time.
** chow **

Wow Vida is Jamie's sister. I wonder is Vida a werewolf ?

I really loved the new chapters. For a second i thoguht souji was a vampire, with Liam, and they were having some type of rivalry.
Anyway I love the chapter ( that's my second time saying it lol ) and I think Jamie as a werewolf is bad arse. So keep on dishing out awesome chapters and I can't wait to read what happens next.

More. Now. Waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.

Omg I am sooo happy that the chapter is up. I couldn't tell that you had no inspiration for the chapter, it was well written and thought through to me. Anyway I love the insight to the characters and can't wait to read on. I do feel like the story is turning away from its natural curse and the story line is getting lost in the flash back, that might be some thing to think about.
Until next time.
** chow **

This was a really interesting chapter. I love the insight of Jamie's past and I'm starting to wonder if Jamie is related to Vida hmmm I wonder... Anyway I can't wait to read more and sorry it took me sooooo long to review. Bye for now.
** chow **

Aw man... this is starting to look a LOT like that anime... still, can't wait for the next update haha

I really liked the action in this chapter so keep up the good work and I can't wait to read what's in store.

** chow **

I loved all the action in this chapter and can't wait for more. Gjob with the

When I got him scrim six flags at ten O'clock I was so exeuated. I had sugar all around my mouth from the sugary drinks and funnel cake, My legs hurt from walking around all day and the new karate class I'm taking and and I just wanting to climb into bed and sleep. However I checked my updates, nOt expecting any,when I saw there was I could not wait until morning. I was not desapointee in the chapter and keep up the good work.

** chow **

I'm so excited. Jamie is starting the change and it makes excited to learn about Jamie and his last., also to learn who is Vida to him.

Yay! Souji is still and mysterious, beautiful teenager lol. I have always been a fan of your stories so keep on doing what you do because there is nothing wrong with the story.

I'm loving the chapter and I can't wait to read more. Continues the good work.

** chow **

Ah... the title reminded me of the anime Vampire Knight haha

P.S. So you're trying to make a present-tense story, huh? That's not easy 'cuz it may be distracting, but this one in particular's greatly written...awesome :D