I'm a little confused in the scene where Lexia is sorting the sails and they're being chased. :S And I thought it was Anton on the boat, not Max.
Otherwise, still really good. :) But you can't stop in the middle of a sentence! D:

Okay, there's a few spelling/grammar issues, and I don't understand how if Lexia was asleep she'd be a) dressed, and b) have her sword. I think this needs to be explained a little more.
I feel like the chapters are a little long - it takes me a while to get through them. Otherwise, still good. :)

I like it so far, but I don't understand how you can have a 'patchy leather hilt' - hilts are the metal handles of swords.
Otherwise, really good! :D