|Reviews for Thinking|
| K. Elisabeth 5/15/12 . chapter 1
I've always believed that the way you arrange words on the page can mean just as much as the words themselves, and I think you showed that here. I love the things you did emphasis-wise with bolding, italics, and letter spacing. It wasn't overdone, and it gave you a real sense of artistry within the poem.
The part I particularly liked the most was here:
"somethinganything to say
that means what I want it to mean"
The way the words run into each other shows the desperation the author has in trying to find the right words. And then the irony of ending the poem by saying you were never good with words anyway, when this entire poem was a display of artistry with words, it hit me just right as a poet myself.
In short, loved it! And thanks for putting me on your alerts. :)
| True Talker 5/10/12 . chapter 1
You are MOST definitely AMAZING with words. I am 100% CERTAIN.
| HilaryDroxursox 5/8/12 . chapter 1
Wow! This was fantastic!