Very nice :3

very true, i can see your point lol

Very nice job, and nicely written. Keep it up :D

"Pagan dancing in the midnight breeze" is a lovely line! Being ignorant, I had to look up Therian. I wanted then to see the Therian as concretely as the pagan and the vampire.

Interesting theme- and I find myself thinking sometimes parents find it difficult when their children negate the values they meant to instill. "Devil's daughter" was too far over the top parenting wise- it's hurtful rather than befuddled. "Ignorance is bliss" works well.

Very good- I think everyone has that feeling at some point in their life. Perhaps not the bit about pagans and vampires in eveyone's mind, though. But I think at some point in their life, people do have the feeling that they are not being seen fully.

Amazing. Truly Amazing. I think this nearly everyday. I haven't been touched by something for years but that poem really touched me. I loved it.

true, so true.

I have never read something more true.

this. this piece is extremely intense! It reflects my thoughts, and feelings for humanity. You got me thinking again. Beautifully written. Well done! :D

I like this. Ignorance, it seems, truly is bliss. I feel the same way about my mother and most of the people I go to school with. I think the repetition in certain places really adds to this, it shows the emotion and the need that you feel to emphasise your point. It's a shame that no one this is aimed at will read this. Anyway, great job :) Well done :)

God, at times I feel like screaming at my parents. I'm glad you did it in the literal way ;)

Good job, Flows rather nicely.

Perhaps you should show this to your parents, someday.