A brilliantly executed and beautiful poem to be sure. I have no complaints except one (and this is just a simple spelling/typo correction): On the twentieth line of the poem you wrote "and I will see though you into death" when I'm quite certain you meant to say "through" as opposed to "though". But that doesn't detract from the overall product, most assuredly.

A brilliant piece (:

I LOVE THIS oh wow :-)