It's stunning! Sad ending I was so into by then that I had to re-read it after that :D. It's a clingy poem in the beginning (how the two charectirs rely on each other) and I guess love slowly plays second wheel because it can't keep whatever it is tighter. Beautiful poem!

Not so bad. The rhythm isn't so good in some places, but I like the words and their meaning. :)

I like this...a lot.