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| Reviews for Sir Time |
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  Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 1 It resembles Alice In wonderland |
 thetabbykitteh 5/10/12 . chapter 1Wow this was very enjoyable. Kitty |
| Shauni Cooper 5/9/12 . chapter 1 wow. You continue to amaze me! The way you choose your words and present them in your style perplexes me. Very well done! I loved it! Hope to read more from you soon! Keep it up! :) As always, keep writing! -Shauni |
| DarkInkyDreamer 5/9/12 . chapter 1 A very original idea I like how you altered the rhyme scheme it gave the piece depth, but I love the second stanza such brilliant metaphor and imagery. I like how you started the last stanza but for me it lost a lot of power on the last line. A good write :) xx |
