|Reviews for A Short Game of Cards|
| livingspiritz1 10/15/12 . chapter 1
"I'll be in my room if anybody wants to try me."
| Ashlyn the Little Mermaid-out 5/9/12 . chapter 1
Sorey about that. Just work on grammar for example use 'he doesn't care' instead of 'he don't care'. Other than that great job.
| Ashlyn the Little Mermaid- out 5/9/12 . chapter 1
This is a great story, it has a strong voice and is very readable. Good job.
I say just work on the grammar a bit because some of the dialogue is incorrect such as 'I don't