...Interesting. A bit clichéd, but interesting. I'm much more interesting in the dream sequence.

Or was it?

Careful, Jamie. Don't go catfishing yourself!

This is a very unconventional but brilliant Slenderman story. I do think he is lonely but a dangerous fellow, nonetheless. My friend and I once went hunting for him and I'm in the process of writing a story based on that. I love the connection that Jamie has with him. Usually I don't read stories this long out of pure laziness, but Slenderman intrigues me and your writing is wonderful. I cannot wait to read more!
-Abracadabra

Cool

Little girl's a Proxy! *Little girl's a Proxy!* D:

Also that was quite possibly one of the most grotesque things I have ever read and envisioned Slenderman doing ever.

Thank you. I love this fic. I'm so scared but I can't stop reading because I'm so intrigued. It's like an abusive, sadistic lover with how slowly you update but it's so. Good.

Dear God, that was a creepy ass dream! And something tells me that her talk with Katrina isn't going to go too well.

oooooooohhh please update sooon!

This is a really good Slendy fic, better than the others. Plz update soon! Thx. :)

So far im really enjoying it but i wish it was finished it is a very interesting read :)

OOoohh, freaky! I have a feeling I know who this girl is...or maybe not. I love the way you write this story, and I'm glad to see you've updated. UPDATE AGAIN. SOOOON (Or I'll come for you ;)

'Tis I, too lazy to sign in.

I really love how you keep Slendy creepy but almost inviting at the same time. Very mysterious. If anyone could have a grasp on what this being is and what motivates it, you're certainly one of them. I keep wanting to know what's going to happen next and keep both anticipating and dreading what it could be. Let's see where the unknown takes us next, shall we? ;3

what happens next?
please update soon i like this story it's not bad

Wow. This is the first story I have ever read about Slender man. I saw it while I was searching through the horror section for a particular story but this one had caught my attention. I remember playing slender only a few nights ago... and it had freaked the heck out of me. I though A horror story based with such a paranormal being would be great to read... and I wasn't wrong! This is amazing! My heart hasn't stopped beating throughout the story! I want more. Please! You have been doing an amazing job with writing this and the twists within. I cannot wait to see how Callie died, and who the mysterious stalker is and how this all connects with Slender. Write more! Please!

This is pretty interesting, and a far different take on the "Slendy just wants someone to love him :c" concept so many of these fics take. I am intrigued and will certainly continue following this story. I want to know what this big plot twist is, I want to know who this mysterious watcher is, and I really want to know what exactly Slendy really wants with your protagonist...

I think I have an idea of who this 'stalker' is...but I'm probably wrong. xD

Awesome chapter, and I'll look forward to the next update.