The imagery! You definitely have a way with words.
The message of 'it's okay to break' and to sort of accept that you're fallible, is really strong.

Amazing, really. Simply amazing.
BlameMyMuses

Amazing. One of the best pieces I've read on here :)

This haunts. Really like the solemn smiles plastered . . . never rub off."

I like this, very interesting and different from most of the nonsense I see on here. Good work