Extremely rich and poetic. I love it :)

Christine

I love the way you make your readers have to think about what they read. I have for the most part taken this approach myself. Nothing too obvious, it's long been a pleasure of mine to disect a thought and see where it leads. You're a fascinating writer of poetry. This again is littered with great descriptions, and an air of sadness.

Sound is born,

though she shall not be its mother.

Great and sad ending to this..

F.C