Very sweet. Delicately encapsulates the meaning behind true love, I feel.

Very, very nice. It was positive and that alone is refreshing to read. Everything seems to be so negative now a days, it's great to see someone hanging on to a spark of happiness. Love it.

I love this! The wording is beautiful and the overall structure of the poem is wonderful. Good job! Keep up the good work!

A great piece, something I can relate too. Very well worded, with a lot of meaning. It literly gave me shivers. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poems, it means a lot.

Sincerly,

I really loved this. The imagery was perfect you painted it beautifully! Loved it, great piece!

I think this may sound a little weird but for some reason I feel this poem should be sadder. I mean the person who was speaking in the poem was saying how hurt they were, but suddenly someone comes along and now their better again? To me I just feel that if their heart could be fixed up so easily they were not as hurt as they thought they were. And again this may sound weird but I was a little disappointed in the character.

I LOVEEEEEEE THIS POEMMMMM! I can relate to it soooo much! The descriptions? Oh my Jesus! They were wonderfullllllllll. This was beyond breathtaking and I applaud this soooo much. Please, keep it up .

This is amazing, and I loved the way you worded it.

Kitty

Shauni, this is amazing. I am really moved. To write this well, you have had to have a great deal of hard, emotional experiences and pain in your life at such a young age. Kudos to you for using all of that in this healthy, creative, artistic way!

Your friend,

Tiff

wow, I loved it. It's starts off sad but then there is hope. Loved it.

your poems always make me shiver. Your words are legendary ;O

I also love the special kind of structure on this! It also gives a monadic meaning to the poem. A brilliant piece! Always keep things rollin' :D

This is great.

I love how it is really touching and so very sad at the beginning, but in the end hope comes up and everything can work out.

And I really like your choice of words, they suit perfectly.

Well done :D

This is pretty good. Decent structure. Well done