|Reviews for Cage|
| SkinnyLove203 1/7/13 . chapter 1
Very sweet. Delicately encapsulates the meaning behind true love, I feel.
| Love A Mysterious Thing 7/30/12 . chapter 1
Very, very nice. It was positive and that alone is refreshing to read. Everything seems to be so negative now a days, it's great to see someone hanging on to a spark of happiness. Love it.
| Stonehartdreamer27 7/25/12 . chapter 1
I love this! The wording is beautiful and the overall structure of the poem is wonderful. Good job! Keep up the good work!
| IHeartWritingSoThere 7/17/12 . chapter 1
A great piece, something I can relate too. Very well worded, with a lot of meaning. It literly gave me shivers. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poems, it means a lot.
| AppleCrumble 6/12/12 . chapter 1
I really loved this. The imagery was perfect you painted it beautifully! Loved it, great piece!
| CrimsonPrincess123 5/17/12 . chapter 1
I think this may sound a little weird but for some reason I feel this poem should be sadder. I mean the person who was speaking in the poem was saying how hurt they were, but suddenly someone comes along and now their better again? To me I just feel that if their heart could be fixed up so easily they were not as hurt as they thought they were. And again this may sound weird but I was a little disappointed in the character.
| Natari Mirumura 5/17/12 . chapter 1
I LOVEEEEEEE THIS POEMMMMM! I can relate to it soooo much! The descriptions? Oh my Jesus! They were wonderfullllllllll. This was beyond breathtaking and I applaud this soooo much. Please, keep it up .
| thetabbykitteh 5/15/12 . chapter 1
This is amazing, and I loved the way you worded it.
| John 8.36 5/14/12 . chapter 1
Shauni, this is amazing. I am really moved. To write this well, you have had to have a great deal of hard, emotional experiences and pain in your life at such a young age. Kudos to you for using all of that in this healthy, creative, artistic way!
| Meadow Frost 5/13/12 . chapter 1
wow, I loved it. It's starts off sad but then there is hope. Loved it.
| kaykay-writes 5/13/12 . chapter 1
your poems always make me shiver. Your words are legendary ;O
I also love the special kind of structure on this! It also gives a monadic meaning to the poem. A brilliant piece! Always keep things rollin' :D
| Pinchen 5/13/12 . chapter 1
This is great.
I love how it is really touching and so very sad at the beginning, but in the end hope comes up and everything can work out.
And I really like your choice of words, they suit perfectly.
Well done :D
| B.A. Howard 5/12/12 . chapter 1
This is pretty good. Decent structure. Well done