Scary but good.

Kitty

Nice poem. I have a few suggestions for it, but other than that it was lovely. But to be honest, I felt like I was reading more of a story than a poem. Maybe this poem can be turned into a story? But this is awesome! I loved it! Passion was great, descriptions flawless,and it came together nicely. Keep it up .

Nice work. I really like how it all sounds.

Good job! It's real good!