Cute concept. 8)

You have a good grasp on spelling and grammar, which can't be said of many authors on this site, and you have the drive to actually finish a story, which is quite rare indeed.

However, you leave a lot to the imagination, so some more details as far as what your characters look like and where they are would be helpful.

I also don't feel like I fully understand the characters enough to be emotionally invested. I get the gist, and the gist is intriguing, but I think you could delve deeper into their motivations, particularly the motivations of Claire and Mikhail's family.

Keep writing