|Reviews for Wedding Go Wrong|
| Palm Tree 5/13/12 . chapter 1
Cute concept. 8)
You have a good grasp on spelling and grammar, which can't be said of many authors on this site, and you have the drive to actually finish a story, which is quite rare indeed.
However, you leave a lot to the imagination, so some more details as far as what your characters look like and where they are would be helpful.
I also don't feel like I fully understand the characters enough to be emotionally invested. I get the gist, and the gist is intriguing, but I think you could delve deeper into their motivations, particularly the motivations of Claire and Mikhail's family.