Please update this! I would like to read more!

This story was sooo cute! Little mice, my first time seeing these creatures in a story on this site! The conflict suited the story, and the little furry characters were adorable! I can just see those small expressions on their faces! Update!

I really loved this! Please keep up with this story, I want to know what is going to happen!

What a great story! The plot sounds intriguing! I also love the idea of a disabled main heroine! Definitely makes for a better tale!

My only suggestion (aside from CONTINUING!) is to go back through this opening chapter and fix any grammatical mistakes. That will help the reader along, and will help your story flow properly.

I wish you the best of luck and many thanks for a new twist on a favorite story!