Oh my, that was... amazing. It was so well written. Probably one of the best short stories i've read in a long time. I think it would be cool to do a sort of past and future of the town. To see what it was like before and to see if Emma made a difference. But, if you dont it doesn't matter .)

omgfhsdwefdyafd this was AMAZING! Why has this not had more reviews? This is BRILLIANTLY written with such a good story - it's written like a proper novel! Is it ironic that I found this and my RE exam is tomorrow? ;)

PLEASE please please carry on, and soon!

Yours in complete awe,



(PS I don't think I've used capital letters so many times in a review, but this is a deserving case!)