|Reviews for Heathens|
| AnonymousLily 6/15/12 . chapter 1
Lol! I loved this! The title makes the point that these boys will not accept the civilization they've been born in to. There's a magical undertone to this- as a female, I wish I had had the option of being a heathen when a child!
| Natari Mirumura 6/12/12 . chapter 1
Cute and done in a lovely manner. Keep it up :D
| IcarusForgotten 6/5/12 . chapter 1
once again, you have left me feeling awe-struck and speechless at how simply and effectively you can convey a point that has the allusive weight of a titan with no more than the sprinkling of feathers.
| Punslinger 5/31/12 . chapter 1
I guessed it was a haiku even before you told us. And a very good one. Reminds me of when I was a boy dreaming I was Tarzan, living in a land where it was always Summer and clothes weren't needed.
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| Self-DissectedPsyche 5/16/12 . chapter 1
Charming, and wonderfully open to interpretation. Within the haiku itself, I see a sort of Shel Silverstein type moment where the kids care more about their toys than clothing. In considering the title at face value, however, I find a metaphor with more serious connotations. Could man be labeled heathens because they value their personal possessions over themselves? This is exactly how haiku should be treated, well done.