|Reviews for I Am Alone|
| my.life.is.over 5/26/12 . chapter 1
I don't understand. You don't think you're good at this? W.T.F. That's all I have to say. You're amazing at this. Damn.
| Small Wings Flying 5/16/12 . chapter 1
Interesting. The short bursts are really effective. I think this would have flowed far better with some punctuation though - fullstops mostly; there isn't much of a difference between one line and the next the way you've written it. The repetition of "I am alone" seems to serve somewhat as a divider, so it seems there should be a break either before or after...or something. “No friends only enemies” and “No light only darkness” also sound like they should be split by commas like the previous statements that share a similar structure. The only other thing I'm curious about is your title. Is that first line simply a reiteration of that or a part of the poem. The capital of "alone" confuses the issue a little, but if it is a title you should bold or underline it. Italicising alone is somewhat more uncommon but just anything to tell it apart from the actual poem.
| Rogue Energizer Bunny 5/15/12 . chapter 1