Wow! This had magnificent rhythym!

That is really good for doing when you're bored...

I also find that my poems are usually better if I write them when I'm bored, it gives me a reason to try not to be bored. Writing stories? Not so much...

Anyway, I like how you show the good about fire as well, I think that's important.

Good job!

Sincerely,

ILAUGHATYOUALL