|Reviews for Wish for a Wonderland|
| tItAnIUm AprIl 5/19/12 . chapter 1
Sorry for late reply. I wanted to be the first one to review but its ok I guess. Cause you earned a very good review.
Now about the poem. Honestly when I read it for the first time I felt the same way, like it was something about afterlife. After all we live in this hope that someday we'll be far away from this life full of pains, hatred, regrets, and tears. Someday we'll get to the life where nothing goes wrong.
You should write more poems. I really loved it.
| Archia 5/17/12 . chapter 1
It sounds like a wonderful world, where everything is good. "Their lives the fairies and the angels," It should be the other 'there'. But the rest is fine.
I actually saw this as a life after death, but I'm not sure if I'm meant to see it that way, things seemed to be pointing towards it, but that could just be the way I see it.
I really enjoyed this poem, and the way this world was described, you made it seem to beautiful and wonderful.