|Reviews for and the world spins madly on|
| Naver 11/5/12 . chapter 1
I like this, though I do not get a feel of a poem.. but this is a good piece of writing! :)
For a poem maybe sum the ideas, relate them to objects, and space lines..
(then again maybe you prefer this..)
Continue to write!
| YuePantera 5/31/12 . chapter 1
I like this a lot! I never thought of it quite like this before and it certainly has got me thinking! Good work on this. :)