Wow.. That was just wow'

I was intrigued with the summary thats why i started reading it, and before i knew it i was so engrossed i didnt realize i was nearing the last chapter until i saw that chapter 23 had nothing after it :) what an amazing storyteller u are. Im so glad to have stumbled back into reading fictionpress after a long hiatus. And im so so honored to have read a story from a talent like yourself :) please continue what you're doing because you are absolutely amazing at it!

Keep writing! Keep inspired!

my previous review is missing a few words so,

this story really deserves more reviews but dont worry, this is a fairly newly written one. so i believe many more will read and review in the future.

love the plotline first and originality really is the main thing i love about the story.

the way u wrote it was great and suit the mood/theme.

im just a bit impatient with the gradual descriptions/explanations of certain things and details. but the anticipation was well worth it.

u tied the loose ends that mattered nicely albeit some of them were a bit delayed?

i dont know if i am making sense or not anymore...sorry bout that.

can u pls write an epilogue?

the last chapter is great but like u mentioned its a bit rushed. so, pretty please? haha. but seriously.

this story really deserves more reviews but dont worry, this is a fairly newly written one. so i believe many more will read and review in the future.

love the plotline fist and originality really is the main thing i love about the story.

the way u write the story also is great and suits the mood/theme. im just a bit impatient with the gradual description of certain things and details. but the anticipation was well worth it.

u tied the loose ends that mattered albeit a bit delayed.

i dont know if i am making sense or not anymore...sorry bout that.

can u pls write an epilogue?

the last chapter is great but like u mentioned a bit rushed. so, pretty please? haha. but seriously.

that's disturbing.

even with all that happen to him roman was truly didnt have a clue what amazon really is before alexis explained everything to him in her kitchen?

yay! answers!

it'll b nice if there're more explanation on what is the first,second age, what's with the prospects and other things. what i got now are just guesses and not knowing certain things for sure while reading a story is kinda frustrating.

wow, really wow.

really interesting plot so far. im a sucker for good supernaturals stories.

the only complaint i have is the lack of explanations about the amazons.i still dont have a clear idea what they really are.

but its ok i guess as the story is still in its early stage.

Hey, thanks, Mistress! I'd pretty much given up on anyone reviewing this one. Really only bothering to finish it because...well, I had to. I'm sure you know how that is.

So yes, thank you for the encouragement and for the community add. :D

This is awesome! Totally digging your style! Can't believe this has no reviews yet! I've added it to my community so maybe it'll get you a little more exposure.