|Reviews for The Past that Stains|
| Apeirophobic Angel 10/16/12 . chapter 5
He STABBED a guy?!
oh my god, i actually love him more now hahaha
| Apeirophobic Angel 10/16/12 . chapter 3
"... favorite band is Chevelle.." OH. That's it, I'm sold. In love with her now.
but then she has to go and ruin it with the "I can't" at the end jsdofalsdf
| N.M. Poynter 9/8/12 . chapter 9
This is interesting. When I read the summary, I figured Max's past was a rape or some other commonly written about tragic experience. I was pleasantly surprised to find a less common past event. One critique (from a self-proclaimed grammar nazi, so please don't take offense): I've noticed several places where "You're" should actually be "Your." For example, in this chapter, Sheryl says, "You're father..." (basically "You are father"). "Your father" would work better (showing possession).
| PsalmSeven 5/17/12 . chapter 2
Interesting story! I feel so bad for Max though. It sounds like she's been through a lot. I'm also curious about this new guy, Drake... Hmmmmm... If she lets him in and he's really as nice as he seems, maybe he can help her heal. :3