Wow! This was really deep and dark, but so real and beautiful. You touched on an issue that gets everyone. Great job :)

Christine

woah. that was amazing. i really love your writing, i can identify with the things that you write about, its soo good :)

while reading this for some reason I just want to give you a hug but, the poem is perfect.

Very very nice. I love the emotions surging throughout this poem. Awesome job, keep it up .

I love dark poems, and I love them even more when they have a strong message such as this.

This was very well written. I kept chanting it in my head. It has a really hard effect on the reader and your imagery is really well done. Good work! X

This is excellent :-) I love it!

A dark, but beautiful poem backed up by a powerful message. Great job.

I have read many poems on this subject area but the rhyme scheme and rhythm emphasised the emotion, a wonderful piece.

xx